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glam av wip by dawnsierra glam av wip by dawnsierra
WIP for my avatar for Glam!

I was kind of going for a romantic steampunk thing here.

Please leave helpful CC comments if you can see anything I could potentially improve. However bare in bare alot of work HAS gone into it and some things... eh.. lol.. I'm just sick of messing with.
I feel that I'm nearly done.. not that I could ever really be "done done".. but that I've reached my current limit of patience. However it would be a shame to have worked this hard and not at least invite advice and help from my dear friends in the art community.
Just.. be gentle... ;)

DO NOT USE. DO NOT DISTRIBUTE.

base by lithriel
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Fanga Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks awesome! I love the colours and the details, especially the roses in her hair. The one thing that bothers me is that the hair is so soft and anti-aliased, while the rest of it is quite crisp.

A bit less anti-aliasing (mostly towards the right front) would help. There's also a bit of imbalance, since all the tiny details are on the bottom half. If you change your mind about free strands, that would balance things out, but it should be fine without them.

Ahem. *goes back to drooling over the detailing*
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dawnsierra Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok... well hell NO am I removing anti-alias. hahaha However I am trying very hard to match the same level or near the level of anti-alias throughout and I'm trying to add some strands.. even though its a huge pain in the butt. lol

Thanks SO much for helping me.. :glomp:
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